Before the actual critique of this deviation proceeds, I will note two critiques by ~RenamonMega of very similar pictures: Smoshen's Critique Please and KawaiiDesuClawzy's Hottie Boy. This immediately signals that the work is not original at all, since it is yet another MS Paint (or related software) drawing.
What is shown here is merely a smiling man with his hands in the air, possibly jumping. This is the work's subject, but the complementary context is missing and must be added in. Could this man be in a state of euphoria, having won bundles of cash from The Million Pound Drop? Or is he an artist with stereotypical moustache, satisfied that his work was selected for exhibition in the Singapore Arts Museum? There is no "what", no "where", no "when", but most important of all, no "why". For these same reasons, as well as the glaring plea for critiques on the bottom, viewers are easily turned off.
There exist much better drawings made with Microsoft's only graphics editor (Homestuck is actually created in Photoshop); this is certainly not one of them. Its small size exposes individual pixels in all their eye-soring, binary glory. Finally, all aspects of the human anatomy must be accounted for, to bring this picture to life.
I am being completely honest... This is what critics do. This is what critics are.
I'll give you 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 bits for that magnificent work of art. Who is responsible for this master piece?
I just love how he's serious about this piece of art.
I was being sarcastic and I used Paint.Tool SAI to sarcastically draw it xDD